REFLECTIVE WRITING - Year 5 & 6 Camp
You have prepared 3 slides of writing - Well done, but we’re not done yet!
It is your turn to turn them into a finished piece of writing. 
You will need to write two extra paragraphs - an Introduction to Year 5 & 6 Camp, and a Conclusion; how did you feel about camp once it was finished?
Introduction - Who, What, When, Where?  | 
Im CingCing and i went to camp last week so let me tell you all about it.  | 
Paragraph One: Your Happy Moment  | 
KI had a really great time but my happiest moment was when sliding because I could challenge people and do some poses while sliding  | 
Paragraph Two: Your Challenging Moment  | 
It was when we were riding bikes and i did not know had to bike but i still did it even tho i was scared 
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Paragraph Three: Your Proud Moment  | 
It was when biking because one the year 6’s were scared to bike which made me proud because i biked with no tears in my eyes and yes i help the year 6. 
 
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Conclusion: How did you feel after all of that?  | 
Well when i got back home i felt amazed but also sleepy.  | 
 
 
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